Hobsonphile (hobsonphile) wrote,
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Because I have no computer access at work, I spend my lunch breaks reading B5 tie-ins.

Is it just me, or does Jeanne Cavelos have an annoying habit of restating the same thing five times in a single chapter? How many different ways can you say that Elric was devastated upon leaving his place of power anyway? It's like she thinks we can't remember from one page to another what's happened before.

An editor is needed here. Seriously. Though the base story is not too bad at all. So far, it hasn't changed my mind about the technomages being asshats by and large, but I am actually somewhat interested in seeing how Galen develops.
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